Thirty Years and a Whistle
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Category: Fiction
Author: Rama Ramanan
Season 8

In the blistering summer of 1986, Ramakant Mishra arrived at the Chennai Central railway station with a faded tin trunk, a rolled-up gamcha, and hope folded carefully in his shirt pocket. He had boarded the train at Gaya, elbowing his way into a general compartment packed with men like him—dreamers from the dust. A job was waiting, someone had said. A watchman’s job. Not much, but steady. That was enough for him.

The city was nothing like his village. Chennai smelled of salt and diesel, moved to a rhythm too fast for his Bihari tongue. Tamil came at him like waves, but he held his ground with gestures and broken English, surviving on vadas and sweet tea. He landed the job a week after his arrival—night watchman at Ganesh Engineering Works, an industrial factory in Ambattur.

The first night in the security cabin, he felt both proud and painfully alone. The factory loomed behind him, massive and humming, like a sleeping animal. His cabin—hardly larger than a godown closet—had a table, a rusted chair, and a foldable cot. No fan. A single bulb blinked uncertainly above. The walls bore the scent of old rain, paan spit, and burnt mosquito coils.

For 30 years now, Ramakant has watched that gate. He has seen machines come and go, workers retire, owners change, and glass windows become tinted ones. But he has remained, his post unchanged like the old banyan tree beside the wall.

He bathes every morning at the public tap near the bus depot, using a plastic mug and sandal soap. His uniform is always ironed, his moustache neatly trimmed, and his voice unfailingly polite. Workers greet him with a nod; managers barely look his way. But none of that matters to him. His job is to guard, and he does it like it’s sacred.

Once every three years, he goes back to Gaya. The factory grants him leave, the train still takes two days, and his village still welcomes him like he never left. His wife, Savitri, keeps a list of things to tell him. His daughter touches his feet, now a schoolteacher in a government school. His son, he notes with quiet pride, works at a local government office—clean shirt, polished shoes, respect in the village.

But after two weeks, Ramakant always returns.

“Babuji,” his daughter once asked, “why don’t you retire and stay with us?”

He had looked at her, smiled, and said, “Retirement is for people who feel tired. I only feel empty when I’m away from the gate.”

You see, the gate had become more than just metal and paint. It was his rhythm, his measure of time. The 6 AM shift change. The lunch whistle. The evening horn. The idle chatter of workers waiting for their bus. He was not a stranger here; he belonged.

The cabin had transformed too. Over the years, he added a small shelf with books and photos. A plastic Ganesha sat at the corner, facing the door. His grandchild’s crayon drawing was pinned to the wall—Nana with a Big Whistle.

He no longer needed an alarm. The birds and the buzz of early traffic woke him up. At night, he’d sit outside, sipping tea from a steel tumbler, watching the stars drown in the city’s haze.

“Sir, you’ve been here longer than the machines,” a young engineer once joked.

Ramakant laughed, tapping his lathi on the ground. “Machines rust. I don’t.”

No one knew how much he missed his wife’s tamatar chutney or the softness of his own bed. No one knew he sometimes pressed the phone to his ear long after the call had ended, just to feel a presence.

But he never complained. He carried silence like a well-folded shawl—draped lightly, worn daily.

One monsoon evening, a delivery boy at the gate asked him, “Uncle, aren’t you lonely here?”

Ramakant looked out at the rain. Then, with a half-smile, said, “I’ve seen 10,000 sunrises from this gate. I’ve heard machines cry and men laugh. The factory breathes, and I listen. That’s not loneliness, beta. That’s life.”

As factories nearby began to automate and younger security staff arrived with phones glued to their ears, Ramakant stayed analog. He kept ledgers by hand, remembered worker names by heart, and carried an old torch that flickered but never failed.

One winter night, the manager found him sitting still at the gate, eyes closed, back straight.

“Ramakant-ji?” he called gently.

The old watchman opened his eyes slowly, smiled and stood up.

“Was listening to the silence,” he said.

That night, a stray dog sat beside him. Ramakant tore a piece of biscuit in half, shared it, and looked beyond the compound.

After thirty years, the city didn’t feel strange anymore. The Tamil words came easier. The dosa corner near the factory knew his order before he spoke. His name was etched into the place—on registers, in memories, in unnoticed ways.

He may not own property or drive a scooter, but in his little security cabin, he had built a life that few understood—a life built on duty, dignity, and the soft hum of a gate that always opened with a nod from him.

And somewhere in Gaya, his grandson tells friends, “My Nana guards a giant factory in Chennai. They say even the owner doesn’t come in without his permission.”

He says it with pride. Just like Ramakant Mishra wears his faded uniform each morning. Still crisp. Still standing.

Still the man at the gate.

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